Homework for all classes:

-finish your Storybird

-post a link to the Storybird here on the Wiki

-test your link

-comment on other people's stories

Hello Everyone,

Here is the page for your to put your Storybird work on. You can comment on each other's stores on Storybird, but it would be great if you could do it here on the Wiki as well so that we can all see your comments.

I'm excited to see how creative you will all be with this program.

Thanks,

Miss Gunter

Here's the Storybird that I made for year 8. Do you like it?

http://storybird.com/books/the-day-8h-learned-a-lesson/?token=7e8e8h

And here's the one that I made for 7C:

http://storybird.com/books/the-legend-of-7c/?token=txecm5

And finally, a Storybird for 7S:
http://storybird.com/books/the-journey-of-7s/?token=acxjxr

Hello its Eric Kang here.

http://storybird.com/books/penguin-flight/?token=7r4fdr

Jiwan: I like the way you made your story a comedy.
Miss Gunter: Great job!! You used humour well. Good job including images that matched.

Tamara: Great humour! I enjoyed your story.

Here's mines (Margaux's).

http://storybird.com/books/the-best-friends-37/?token=pvarxu

Miss Gunter - Wow Margaux!! That was awesome. You used the pictures really, really well. Good storytelling too. Well done!
Ellena: Margaux very descriptive and I like the pictures you chose!!
Jiwan Lee

http://storybird.com/books/the-baby-penguin-2/?token=dhh2ea

Miss Gunter: Great job Jiwan!! Loved all the different situations; you told your story well. Good use of pictures too!. I wonder if we can print these for the library or to read in the younger classes? That would be cool.

Hello there! Here´s my story, Tamara

Storybird - The girl that thought she was better than everyone.

Press the link above and it should work;)

Comment:
Miss Gunter: Hey Tamara, I can't get into yours. Try to log in again and go to your published stories and send the link from there. I am looking forward to your story!

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Ronin
I do not know if this is the right place but i will check later if I'm wrong.
Here is my shot story:
Miss Gunter - Hey Ronin, there's no link. Did you forget to paste it?
Ellena: ??

http://storybird.com/books/a-hungry-mans-journey/

Here is my story. It is really funny.
Bye everybody~!
good night!

Miss Gunter - Well done Erica!! You told a really complete story with lots of parts. Good use of images!
I enjoyed your story book! - Jenny 7c

Hi everyone,

I hope you enjoy my storybird! I think Erica's was really funny, and Tamara's was good...enjoy!

http://storybird.com/books/rivalry-2/?token=e53hra

Miss Gunter: Well done! Good use of pictures and good message at the end.

hi i am jake. my story is wierd.http://storybird.com/books/in-a-forest-far-far-away/?token=34hwe9#
Miss Gunter: Good story! I like how you had a twist and then another twist. Good use of pictures!

Hi I am Jenny. I hpoe you enjoy mine!
http://storybird.com/books/jump-monsters/?token=byetdq#
Miss Gunter: Good job! I like your ideas. What else would you write if you were going to keep going?

Hello everybody!!
come and read my storybird
Julia

http://storybird.com/books/dream-big-933/
here is another story bird that i made

http://storybird.com/books/the-little-monsters-friends
JuliaHI JuliaI can't get into your stories. KaylaMiss Gunter: Hi Julia, I can't get in either. I think you have them set to 'private'. Try going back in and saving them as 'public'. Thanks!------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

http://storybird.com/books/little-green-saves-little-pink/Adri
and some more:
http://storybird.com/books/favourite-places/
http://storybird.com/books/the-friend-hunt/
Kayla, I thought your Mummy & Daddy story was cool! :)Mrs Gunter, I loved your stories! :)Erica, your story was bizarre! It made me laugh out loud & I showed it to my Mum and she laughed too! :]
I'll read some more tomorrow night! I'm enjoying this.....
Miss Gunter: Hi Adri, I'm having trouble getting into your stories. I think you have them set to 'private'. Try going back in and saving them as 'public'. Thanks!

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HELLO EVERYONE

This is my storybird
http://storybird.com/books/the-adventure-of-puffy-the-astronaut/?token=f5qxzr

BY: JAY WON LEE!!

I thought the story was quite good although there was a lot of repetition of the word "lame" - Hong Chan
Miss Gunter: Good story. I liked the use of pictures. I agree with Hong Chan though, what is a synonym for 'lame' that you could use?

Hello, people! This is my storybird :D Hope you enjoy it! :P
http://storybird.com/books/the-joy-of-friendship-2/
Miss Gunter: I'm having trouble getting into your story. I think you have them set to 'private'. Try going back in and saving them as 'public'. Thanks! Who is this by the way?

Hi Everyone
here are my storybirds
http://storybird.com/books/yummmmmmm/?token=hvhcwa
http://storybird.com/books/am-i-cute-7/?token=cu8zdc
http://storybird.com/books/daddy-and-mommy-2/?token=3rx8w6

From: to find out who i am read my storybird
Miss Gunter: Well done! I loved all three. Your first two were really funny and the third one was touching. Good use of pictures to match your text!

Hello it's RYAN!!!

Here is my story
http://storybird.com/books/the-alien-131/

Miss Gunter: I'm having trouble getting into your story. I think you have them set to 'private'. Try going back in and saving them as 'public'. Thanks!

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Hello I’m Hong-Chan in 7c!

And this is my story about The Criminal:

http://storybird.com/books/the-crimial/

find out who the criminal might be...

I think the criminal is..... number 1! : Jay Won LEE
I really liked your story 'The Crimial' It is very interesting!! :D -Sarah

Miss Gunter: I'm having trouble getting into your story. I think you have them set to 'private'. Try going back in and saving them as 'public'. Thanks!

Hello, I'm sarah hong in awesome 7s!!

http://storybird.com/books/8rup4b757h/edit/

Read it it is about HAUNTED HOUSE!!!

I really like your story! -Jenny 7c
Miss Gunter: Hey Sarah, I'm having trouble accessing this one. Try going to the final published page and cutting and pasting that link here.

Your story's really really good !!! Hong-Chan

Hey Guys!
So this is Mason and this is my storybird. Its my first one so its not really good.... But i still hope you enjoy it!
Written by the one and only....
Mason AWESOME Chung
http://storybird.com/books/leo-the-jaguar/?token=c9jsz7

Comment Hey Mason your stories awesome!!!! ~ Mason (this comment is a joke)

An interesting story Mason, but you could have added me into the story aswell - Hong Chan

VERY INTERESTING.......: J 1
Miss Gunter: Hey Mason, well done!! Great job using the pictures, and I liked the double twist ending. Good job!

HI EVERYONE!!!

HERE'S MY STORY:

http://storybird.com/books/the-story-of-the-green-creature/?token=b78qgt I hope you enjoy it!

-Jayne

Miss Gunter: Good job Jayne - a bit sad and a bit wacky. Well done!

KEVIN'S sTORY free to read!! ONLY TODAY.
http://storybird.com/books/upa/?token=eek25e

Miss Gunter: Good job Kevin. I like the ideas that you had in this story.

hi i'm justin. have fun seeing.
http://storybird.com/books/a-story-of-the-little-ice-cream-boy/

Miss Gunter: Good job Justin. I'd like to see the adventure go on a bit longer. What does slurped to death mean? Good pictures!

Hello this is Christine. Here is my story-My Happiest Moment

http://storybird.com/books/my-happiest-moment/?token=3qqm99

Hope you enjoy!

Storybird Stories